Eleven by Patricia Highsmith

Patricia Highsmith is one of those novelists I’d meant to read for some years–mostly I’ll admit for film-book connection, so when I picked up my first Highsmith, the logical choice was Strangers on a Train. That’s my all-time favourite Hitchcock film, btw, and I was delighted to discover that the book was even darker than the film. Then earlier this year, I read The Cry of the Owl. It’s the story of a wreck of a man who moves away from New York for a fresh start in a small Pennsylvania town. Lonely and depressed, he becomes obsessed with watching the domestic routine of a young woman, and when she catches him (and thinks he’s a peeping Tom), instead of screaming and calling for the coppers, she invites him in. The Cry of the Owl is an exploration of the horrors of small town life complete with gossip, judgment and condemnation, and for any one interested, like me, in film, Claude Chabrol made a film of The Cry of the Owl.  But now to Eleven, Highsmith’s first short story collection.

After reading Eleven, the main thing that struck me about Highsmith’s work is that she’s firmly rooted in horror. That conclusion surprised me as I considered the two Highsmith books I read primarily as psychological novels. I’m not talking about the slasher type of horror gore, but something that’s harder to peg–something a lot more sophisticated.  The short stories in Eleven give the reader a concentrated dose of Highsmith’s view of life, and Highsmith’s horror is the horror of everyday life, the suffocating routine and the sometimes-sick power dynamic in relationships, a touch of the supernatural and even in the case of two of the stories in this collection–the horror of snails. It takes a special mind to create  two stories in which snails appear as destructive terrifying creatures. These eleven stories cover a range of various subjects. The Barbarians explores bullying and the strain of living under the threat of violence while in  The Birds Poised to Fly, we meet Don, a man whose disappointment in love leads to a cruel deception.

For those interested, here’s a complete list of the contents:

The Snail-Watcher

The Birds Poised to Fly

The Terrapin

When the Fleet was in at Mobile

The Quest for Blank Claveringi

The Cries of Love

Mrs. Afton among thy Green Braes

The Heroine

Another Bridge to Cross

The Barbarians

The Empty Birdhouse

In this collection, some of Highsmith’s protagonists are deranged, others are strange, and still others endure various types of stress until they crack….

 The Terrapin yields a slice of life in a particularly sick household shared by a young boy, Victor and his mother, an over-bearing Hungarian-French woman. Victor’s parents are divorced and his absent father, who’s managed to escape the domestic yoke and now lives in Europe, is  a successful businessman who exports perfumes. Victor’s mother still receives money from her ex-husband, and the money is much-needed. She used to be a children’s book illustrator, but recently there’s little work:

a few illustrations now and then for magazines for children, how to make paper pumpkins and black paper cats for Hallowe’en and things like that, though she took her portfolio around to the publishers all the time.

Although Victor is 11 (same as the title of the book, so Highsmith is consistent here), he’s infantilized by his mother. He’s inappropriately dressed in shorts that are “too small” and tight, and this makes him the object of ridicule from boys his own age. His clothes are just one symptom of his unhealthy relationship with his mother. She constantly reinforces her view of Victor as a baby–at one point, for example, she makes Victor recite the days of the week. She seems oblivious of the constant degradation she subjects him to. This is a woman with problems:

His mother put her jewelled bands on her hips. “do you know, Veec-tor, you are a little bit strange in the head?” She nodded. “You are seeck. Psychologically seeck. And retarded, do you know that? You have the behaviour of a leetle boy five years old,” she said slowly and weightily. “It is just as well you spend your Saturdays indoors. Who knows if you would not walk in front of a car, eh? But that is why I love you, little Veector.” She put her arm around his shoulders, pulled him against her and for an instant Victor’s nose pressed into her large, soft bosom. She was wearing her flesh-colored dress, the one you could see through a little where her breast stretched it out.

The already-poisonous relationship between this troubled pair turns even nastier when Victor’s mother brings home a terrapin. He sees it as a pet, and to his mother, it’s dinner….

Of the entire collection, my favourite story is When the Fleet was in at Mobile. When the story begins, Geraldine chloroforms her husband, Clark who’s sleeping deeply after an all-night booze-up:

She ran in her silk-stockinged feet to the rag drawer below the kitchen cabinets, tore a big rag from a worn-out towel, and then a smaller one. She folded the big rag to a square lump and on second thought wet it at the sink, and after some trouble because her hands had started shaking, tied it to the front of her nose and mouth with the cloth belt of the dress she’d just ironed and laid out to wear. Then she got the claw hammer from the tool drawer in case she would need it, and went out on the back porch. She drew the straight chair close to the bed, sat down, and unstoppered the bottle and soaked the smaller rag. She held the rag over his chest for a few moments, then brought it slowly up toward his nose. Clark didn’t move. But it must be doing something to him, she thought, she could smell it herself, sweet and sick like funeral flowers, like death itself.

Leaving him for dead, she makes a break for freedom and ‘happier days’ spent in Mobile.

She still had that combination everyone said was unique of come-hither plus the bloom of youth, and how many girls had that? How many girls could be proposed to by a minister’s son, which was what had happened to her in Montgomery, and then had a life like she’d had in Mobile, the toast of the fleet? She laughed archly at herself in the mirror, though without making a sound–but who was there to hear her if she did laugh–and jogged her brown-blonde curls superfluously with her palms.

Geraldine, an unreliable narrator, is reminiscent of A Streetcar Named Desire‘s Blanche Dubois for her insane, or is it highly sanitized, version of events regarding the men who’ve helped her in a comfort-0f-strangers-way?

These eleven stories, which offer concentrated doses of Highsmith’s familiar themes also illustrate Highsmith’s range. From the macabre to the mundane, Highsmith’s world reveals that danger, cruelty and injustice are just one step away–lurking in the shadows, and as Graham Greene points out in the excellent introduction, Highsmith’s vision is of a “world without moral endings.”



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24 responses to “Eleven by Patricia Highsmith

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  2. I think I read this collection years ago but had totally forgotten about it. When you mentioned “horror” and “snails” it clicked. I read one of her snail stories and will never forget it… I found it such an unusual choice of animal for a horror-tinted story.
    I think this horror aspect is something she didn’t explore in her novels. I agree it isn’t of the gory type at all, it’s subtle. When I read the collection she struck me as a very versatile author. I don’t know why I never read more of her. Edith’s Diary and the stories is all I have read so far.

  3. I don’t think I’ll forget those snail stories either. I have several of her novels sitting on the shelf (including all the Ripley books), so I’ll be getting to them sooner or later.

    I haven’t read This Sweet Sickness but I have seen the film version (have you?). The film explores the suffocating, claustrophic aspects of an obsessive relationship, and the tension builds steadily. Since so many characters in the film were weird, I’m expecting the book to be good. I’ve really liked both of her novels so far.

  4. I read Le Rat de Venise, a collection of short-stories where the criminals are animals. I was horrified by all the different ideas she found for animals to kill you. I think the one with the snails was in that collection too.
    I should read another of hers too.

  5. leroyhunter

    I love Highsmith, and you’re right when you describe her (in your review of Cry of the Owl) as “criminally under-rated”. I’ve read 10 of her novels and not one of them has been less then impressive. The quality of menace and tension her writing conveys is remarkable.

    I haven’t read any of her shorter stuff but these sound great.

    Incidentally, I had one of the most memorable nights out of my life in Mobile many years ago. What a town…

    • Graham Greene apparently thought the Mobile story was the best in the collection too. I think, if circumstances allow, everyone should visit the American South btw.

    • Leroy: which ones have you read?

      • leroyhunter

        I’ve read the 5 Ripleys, plus Strangers on a Train, Cry of the Owl, This Sweet Sickness, Tremor of Forgery and Deep Water.

        Just today I’ve ordered this and Those Who Walk Away. What’s the point in having a buying embargo if you can’t bust out once in a while?

        • I’m really curious about This Sweet Sickness (since I’ve seen the OOP film).

          I should add that this edition is a re-release and due to the question of whether or not Highsmith gets the attention she deserves, I checked the publication date. The stories go back to the 40s but the original edition (and I assume that means the intro by Graham Greene) was 1970. So I’m wondering if this is an argument for the idea that she faded from view and now there’s a resurgence of interest?

  6. Leroy, this is an interesting comment (I didn’t sufficiently pay attention to Guy’s mentioning it too) about her being underrated. In Germany she is one of the Top 5 of literary crime and very highly regarded and widely read.

    • leroyhunter

      Hi Caroline. I’m not sure she’s even that highly regarded by crime fans in Britain & Ireland – I don’t know if she’d be “top 5”, although I’m open to being corrected on that. Guy quotes Greene talking about her, someone who has a serious reputation, whose books throng the shelves and who is considered to have literary merit. None of those apply to Highsmith in the consciousness of the wider reading public.

      Certainly the Ripley books are well known but beyond that – her other stuff is ignored. Which is crazy, I reckon.

      Interesting (and encouraging) about Germany & Switzerland.

  7. And of course in Switzerland. Logically she lived and died here (my perspective).

  8. I am still in the early stages of my Highsmith voyage but have been following this thread with interest. I think I’ll be sticking with the novels, although may order this just to have some “quick” reads on hand.
    I do think there is a Highsmith revival underway — last year’s biography attracted a fair bit of attention.

  9. Kevin: I read the stories in between other things ( I know you prefer this method too).

  10. I’ve only read the Ripleys, and while I enjoyed the sequels I only truly loved the first.

    The snails thing turned up in the fairly dreadful UK TV series Tales of the Unexpected I think. It started out with Roald Dahl stories but I think they ran out of those and had to use some other writers too.

    I should read Strangers on a Train, the film is marvellous, and Cry of the Owl sounds deliciously disturbing.

    • I still remember a couple of those Tales of the Unexpected, but they were the dahl ones. There was one episode about a couple leaving on holiday and one of them couldn’t stand to be late, and the other spouse kept deliberately delaying things.

  11. I loved this collection of short stories, and the fact they stick in my mind years later shows how good they are (like many people, I’m not big on short stories, but I’ll make an exception for Highsmith!) I definitely feel she’s one of the top psychological thriller writers ever, and I’ve always felt she’d been short changed in Britain. So good to hear about Germany and Switzerland. I don’t remember my (now lost) copy having the Greene intro, but my favourites were exactly the ones you mentioned: Mobile and the terrapin one. And the snails (a warning to never neglect animals!) I’m going to have to get another copy of this!

    • I still remember the snails!

      • I can clearly remember 4 stories; the three I mentioned and the giant snail one, which must be The Quest For Blank Claveringi (does the explorer fall and hurt himself and THEN the giant snail appeared??) I read a review of a Patricia Highsmith bio, I think in The Sunday Times Culture years ago, and it said she had a fascination with snails, and used to pull bags of them out of her handbag at dinner parties (ick!) I don’t think I’ll EVER forget that short story; it’s that they’re a fairly innocuous, small creature (though horrid!) but were still able to do something fatal, albeit in huge amounts!

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